This is coming along nicely! I especially like how your images break the grid on the right side. Only a few things I might consider:
1) the title "China Taste" seems too close to the photo above.
2) possibly bleed the china town photo off the left page on left, right and top.
3) theres a thin white space between photos #4 and #5. Might you consistently use this space between the other photos to make them seem part of a whole? hope that makes sense.
1. Can you try and make the headline "China Taste" bigger so that it pulls readers into the spread and place it slightly away from the picture. I so much like the your main image, its really nice but don't forget to add a caption in your final presentation.
2. In your department's name, I think the "W" in Washington should be capitalised.
3. And lastly the numbers on the pictures seem to be too close to the edge of the pictures, especially #4 and #5.
4. Good job, Yi and good luck. See you on Saturday.
This is coming along nicely! I especially like how your images break the grid on the right side. Only a few things I might consider:
ReplyDelete1) the title "China Taste" seems too close to the photo above.
2) possibly bleed the china town photo off the left page on left, right and top.
3) theres a thin white space between photos #4 and #5. Might you consistently use this space between the other photos to make them seem part of a whole? hope that makes sense.
Great work Yi.
I really appreciate your comments, Omar.
ReplyDeleteNice job,Yi.
ReplyDeleteMy quick comments will be:
1. Can you try and make the headline "China Taste" bigger so that it pulls readers into the spread and place it slightly away from the picture. I so much like the your main image, its really nice but don't forget to add a caption in your final presentation.
2. In your department's name, I think the "W" in Washington should be capitalised.
3. And lastly the numbers on the pictures seem to be too close to the edge of the pictures, especially #4 and #5.
4. Good job, Yi and good luck. See you on Saturday.